Like this illustration. Are you looking for critiques?
Edit: Since you asked I shall give. The shading style can seem wildly inconsistent, especially on both the hat and parasol. The rest of the drawing seems to be in this cell shaded style. If you are going to experiment with a different shading style then fully commit to it. Otherwise you will leave the viewer lost. If you were trying to make you illustration stand out there are many different ways to do so. For example you can add a background to it. Now I don't mean make it detailed or anything I just mean add a simple color or shape around the character. I hope this helps!